#SixSunday: Virgo (WIP)-Dance Club Scene #9

Last week, Sam worshipped Delilah’s musical gift. Today, I am skipping forward a bit more in the dance club scene.

The set-up: Adam has walked away from his turntables to talk to Sam. He calls her “abnormal,” and Sam knows the man means it as a high compliment. Sam agrees, saying she’s “above average,” which Adam scoffs at before asking how much time he has to find a friend in the crowd. Given three minutes, Adam wastes no time leaving the stage. Sam is alone with his thoughts again.


What was normal, anyway? A state of being typical, or having equilibrium, or what? As Sam saw the world, it was populated by things that reasoned and furnished by things that didn’t. Molded, laser-cut, quality-controlled-to-be-identical things were either precise or flawed, so there wasn’t a normal. Or trailer park ghettos sandwiched between gentrified industrial towers for young professionals and suburban cul-de-sacs overrun by kids and DIY landscapers…all were normal to someone.

And speaking of people…there were eight billion unique humans all walking, crawling, or rolling their ways from birth to death with the commonality between them being that they were all aberrations from some unqualified normal.


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38 thoughts on “#SixSunday: Virgo (WIP)-Dance Club Scene #9

  1. I love the elevated vocabulary here. Sam must be one smart–and thoughtful–cookie. I especially like this sentence: "Or trailer park ghettos sandwiched between gentrified industrial towers for young professionals and suburban cul-de-sacs overrun by kids and DIY landscapers…all were normal to someone."

  2. As Sam saw the world, it was populated by things that reasoned and furnished by things that didn’t.I'm not sure Sam is right about the first part, but I like this line. And I like him.

  3. Great snippet, Wendy–thanks for sharing! I love her introspection here; it reveals so much about her. I don't agree about things being either flawed or perfect, but I do on the lack of "normal"–everything, anything, is normal to someone, right? Great lines, and great writing, too. Thanks!

  4. Very nice six! It reminded me of the bumper sticker I used to have taped to my computer, in the era of the big, heavy desktop, "Why Be Normal?," with the N inverted to look like the Russian letter for I.

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